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Victim

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I see you from a distance
Walking away,
Will you ever know
What I have felt?
Stuck in the darkness,
Can't find the light,
Slowly I evanesce.
Intangible, unthinkable,
Immovable, unreachable.
Tonight the journey ends,
Only the victim of an unrequited love.
I swear, there's nothing wrong with me.

This is probably my only real piece of literature.
I do not remember why I wrote this, only that I wrote it last Spring, and it's been rotting in my files ever since. I just rediscovered it, and on a whim, decided to submit it.

Tell me what you think.
© 2008 - 2024 allzquiet
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xrosesxrulex's avatar
You nkow, I like this. It's unlike you top submit literature, let alone poetry, so this is a treat.
It may be short, but it gets your point across.
I like your vocabulary. Great choice of words all around.
It may be a little bumpy in some places, but still, I like it.

Great job! ^_^